Stand bent over the hood of an old Ford,
both pressing down on the frame as though
lifting their hands would give it away. One man
is smoking a cigarette and there is just enough breeze
that the smoke almost appears to be taken.
The other looks deep into the pick-up's chest,
nodding with thought to the bouncing cigarette.
The Ford is for sale and so important details
must be disclosed in order for a transaction to occur.
The smoker points at what must be the sleeping motor
and asks a question. It embeds itself into his lip-bitten filter,
tumbles back through the fibers until finally it is exhaled,
drifting off to wherever it is that important questions go.

7 comments:
It's amazing the way you observe what others do... it's as if i was watching a video... and you place the camcorder where you want me to set my eyes on.
Great piece, Daniel.
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Thank you Dulce! I will do my best to show you what I see.
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completely business like :P
Thanks for the nice comments.
Yours is a blog I definitely want to follow. After reading the last poem, and now, this cinema verite-like piece, I'm hooked and want to read more.
love the description of that last question...and where do they go....
Your words are alive... felt like I was watching the two men myself.
brilliant, daniel. i was there, with the men, listening. watching the questions and ashes drift.
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