12.16.2010

Eczema

in the winter he takes to his skin
like a rat digging for its life, whose
only thought is how to displace
the most dirt in as short a time as possible.

it itches daddy he says to me
scraping at the tickles in his thighs.
if his little nails were knives
his hips would be fringed with flesh,

and when the rakings done -
his tissues red and inflamed with urge
he scurries off in his underwear
faster than any rat you have ever seen.

3 comments:

Neva Flores said...

can't help but wonder if this is your little boy. Wonderful poem!

Claudia said...

justin - not sure if i really get this - but if your son has what my youngest daughter had when she was small, it' hell on earth. she used to had neurodermatitis, starting when she was born until she turned six - and we had endless sleepless nights when she couldn't stop scratching, her skin and her nightgown stained with blood. there was no doctor who could really help her and i hated to see her suffering and there wasn't much i could do but holding her, praying and crying with her. today she has the most beautiful skin but i'll never ever forget this..

labatterie said...

We had endless sleepless nights when she couldn't stop scratching, her skin and her nightgown stained with blood.